Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Chapter #3

They were spacewalking and they were moving their arms. No matter how far they were from the sun, they were still alive. Sissy went to Venus. Something was chasing her and Gem said "Run Sissy !" Finally it stopped chasing Sissy. It was fun on Venus. "P-U !" said Sissy and Gem because it was stinky on Venus. The yellow gas smelled like rotten eggs.

3 comments:

  1. Wow Bryn you're doing a great job with your story.
    I agree PU on Venus, rotten eggs smell real bad. Keep going I enjoy reading. Hope Gem & Sissy have some great adventures on their way to Pluto.
    Love, Gramma

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  2. Ooh, I've been waiting for Chapter 3! That was scary - something chasing Sissy. Thank goodness Gem told her to run - that's what good friends do.

    Rotten eggs! Yuck! I wonder if the other planets will smell bad, too?

    Great job, Bryn - looking forward to the next adventure :)

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  3. glad kindergarten is done sweetie, now we can put more work into your stories and pictures !

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